Meanings of words change, but…

Choose the correct word: Cecil’s spiritual adviser urged Cecil to avoid the porn shop by taking an (alternative/alternate) route to work Colbart was not (adverse/averse) to cheating at solitaire. Abigail was (loath/loathe) to try the fried grasshoppers Mort was raving about. Even the whiskey barbecue sauce didn’t (titillate/titivate) her appetite. (Your/You’re) more than welcome. Bert’s … More Meanings of words change, but…

Spotting Errors

Can you spot the errors in the following sentences? I didn’t bother reading Improve Your Body Image: Make Friends Who Exercise Less Than You Do, which was stupid. Neither the Brown sisters nor Jadwiga have ever considered dating Colbart. Sedgewick almost ran five miles before he remembered that the marathon had been cancelled. To get … More Spotting Errors

Commas and Semicolons

Deciding whether to use a comma or a semicolon can be very stressful. You can reduce the stress by learning how to punctuate compound sentences and series. Look at these sentences: Colbart hates grammar. He often skips grammar class. Both are independent clauses. They’re called independent clauses because they can stand on their own as … More Commas and Semicolons

Cutting Words

Revise these sentences to make them less wordy and compare your revisions with mine. Sylvia very hurriedly scribbled her name, address, and phone number on the back of a greasy napkin. Susan’s stylish jeans, made of leather, were too warm for our climate. She got red at my words, which were spoken in a moment … More Cutting Words

Spot the Errors

Of the following sentences, only one is correct. Can you spot the errors in the others? Jadwiga rushed in the house to hide the whiskey before Colbart arrived. Aunt Mable is reticent to speak of her years as a con artist. The cat was laying on the floor next to the empty bird cage. The … More Spot the Errors

Parallelism

Parallelism is a very important concept in writing. In  compound sentences and lists, each part of the sentence should  be in equivalent or parallel form. Parallel sentence structures make the relationships between various ideas in the sentence clear. Sometimes your ear can be a guide because sentence structures that are not parallel sound a bit … More Parallelism

Killing Adjectives

Mark Twain once wrote, “If you catch an adjective, kill it.” It’s good stylistic advice, although Twain was exaggerating, of course. We couldn’t very well kill off all adjectives. “What color was the dog that bit you?” “What?” “The color of the dog?” “Uh…” But using too many adjectives (and adverbs) is a common mistake … More Killing Adjectives